a preloader. A story line. Good animation. This was lacking in all of those.
Only one thing to say...
Use original content. I know the animation was all you but it was just to some already existing stuff (Team America, as funny as it is, only needed to be done once).
Besides that, I have nothing else negative to say. I liked the animation though, so it's a 6/10.
is pretty cool. It reminds me of a story book type thing. As for the story of the animation itself, thats not too bad. I would say try and make it a bit more entertaining. Other than that, it was really good!
its actually not too bad. I love these types of animations kuz when they're done well, its sooo damn awesome, how one thing goes into another. Theres one by Smartdog that I really like too. Good job.
that damn song!!!
wasn't that bad overall lol
Lawl, what song?
i haven't seen a foamy cartoon forever....
i'd rate high if...
it actually deserved it. You need to make the animation more fluid. its too choppy. PRELOADER!!!!
sorry to say it...
but the music was the only thing that kept my mind from wandering...
take some of your own advice dude. That could've been soo much better. You should actually had the mouth animations match the text...and for that matter you should've just used voice actors for talking...
it wasn't TOTALLY bad though. Had a decent concept
here you go
the animation needs more work. I thought that it might be like clips of hank hills voice with some beats underneath...meh
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